I loved camp kaitawa it was amazingly amazing. I had so much fun swimming and walking and running the confidence course, I really loved caving and kayaking.
You should change all the ands to commas in the brief sentences. Again on the third slide there is 3 ands in the same sentence. I love How you included photos appropriate for the slide.
Hi Alice, I really like the slide and the images. It reminded me of my slides. I think you could add more sentences. But apart from that it is outstanding. Why the cube translation?
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You should change all the ands to commas in the brief sentences. Again on the third slide there is 3 ands in the same sentence. I love How you included photos appropriate for the slide.
ReplyDeletehi Alice i like the slide and the images just it could be better to add sentence.
ReplyDeleteHi Alice, I really like the slide and the images. It reminded me of my slides. I think you could add more sentences. But apart from that it is outstanding. Why the cube translation?
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